"Flow chart", an Introduction
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Re is a de Es udios No eame icanos, n.• 4
(1996),pp.
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-64
FLOWCHART,
AN
INTRODUCTION
DAVID
HAMILTON
Uni e sidad de lowa
Gi en he «Ci y» heme
o
his con e ence, I wish o speak
o
he ci y as eache ,
and mo e speci ically o o e he example
o
one u bane poe - eache , John Ashbe y, a
poe
o
he a an ga de. I would hope ha his alk could se e as a small in oduc ion o
his ecen long poem, Flow Cha (1991
).
I eel
odd
aking up Ashbe y
in
p esen co npany. The ci y, any ci y, eaches
much mo e han he a an ga de. Two w i e s in ou audience oday, William Kennedy
and Philip Le ine, ha e lea ned much om he ci y and ha e augh us qui e di e en
hings o n any ins uc ion we ind in Ashbe y. Le ine desc ibes himsel as a poe who
w i es o people who ha e no poems, especially o wo king people le ou
o
li e a y
cul u e. Ashbe y,
in
um, could
be
desc ibed as a poe who w i es o people who al eady
ha e oo many, o eade s jaded owa d poe y. Fo all hei di e ences, Le ine and
Ashbe y a e poe s
o
he sa ne gene a ion in he Uni ed S a es, and so a e colleagues,
e cn iends. Tha hey, no o men ion s ill mo e dispa a e people, walk he same ci y
s ee s is one mo e way in which he ci y is o en ou su p ising eache .
In a ecen in e iew, he no elis Ma ilynne Robinson men ioned ha «A hu
Go don Pym and Moby-Dick ha e he same -and o ha ma e , Hucklebe y
Finn-
ha e ha cha ac e is ic pa em
o
so
much Ame ican li e a u e whe e people go h ough
a
joumey
ha leads o a kind
o
ealiza ion ha is jus a he Iimi s
o
hei abili y
o
comp ehend
o
a icula e, and a e ha , he e's an openness whe e ea lie expe ience
becomes impossible, and you ' e abandoned in o a new e ain wi hou being able
o
use
you old assump ions abou how o ind you way.» So A. Go don Pym, Ishmael, and
Hucklebe y Finn all ligh ou o he e i o y, and e en hough each e ums o ell his
s o y-How
would we ha e hose i s pe son accoun s
o he wise?-no
one
o
hem
e ums as
ou
companion. Each has anscended
ha
Py n, he ea lies in he se ies, is
said o w i e om Illinois, a
o
in he no hwes e i o y, which may seem unny
now, wi h my ha ing jus lown in om Iowa, s ill a he wes , bu in 1839 Iowa was
no ye a s a e, and lllinois was a s ange place indeed o Poe, a esiden
o
Bal imo e.
54 Da id Hamil on
O
cou se Dickinson nego ia ed
an
inwa d coun e pa
o
his same joumey
simply
by
climbing he s ai s. And Robinson he sel , in H ousekeeping ( 1980), has Ru h and
Ru h
's
men o and odd gua dian aun , Syl ie, make a pa allel passage in o he ghos ly
s a us
o
wande e s, his in he da k
o
he nigh , ac oss a ail oad es le,
o e a
moun ain
lake
so
p o ound as o be known o ha e swallowed a ain.
Though ha dly unique o US li e alu e, one
o
ou mos deeply held belie s
would
seem o be in he au ho i y
o
he wande e who has en u ed beyond he pale.
Tha
pale
is
usually seen as he on ie , as in he case
o
Huck Finn who heads o i
n o
he
« e i o y», which p obably mean Oklahoma and he sou hwes . Mel ille and
Poe
a e
mo e ex eme, seeing beyond any exis ing on ie o he dis an Paci ic and
o
he
An a c ic, s ill mo e emo e. And
o
cou se no on ie
is
mo e dis u bing han he
p i acy
o
an
o iginal soul, such as Dickinson. Each
o
hese examples, dis illed o i s
essence
,
sugges s open space, lo s
o
i , and so loneliness, li e ally and igu a i ely, he absolu e
opposi e
o
ci ies.
Consequen ly his belie inds i s coun e pa , and i onic opposi e, in he
w i e
mo ing in o he ci y a he han ou
o
i , w i e s who mo e in ne e o e um,
o
hey
oo ha e ound hemsel es «abandoned in o a new e ain wi hou being able
o
use
old
assump ions abou how
o
ind you way». Ge ude S ein, H.D., Hen y James, T.S.
Elio , Ez a Pound, Emes Hemingway,
F.
Sco Fi zge ald, Ma ianne Moo e, Ha
C ane,
Ralph Ellison
...
John Ashbe y. F om small owns and egional capi als hey
come,
o
New Yo k, Pa ís, and London. They come o change and o
be
changed. F om he
poin
o
iew
o
hei o igins, hey oo ha e passed beyond he pale. Each has seen
he
dis u bing shapes and ligh shows
o
he u ban An a c ic.
No a
one would seek e i emen
in he Sabine Hills. They loca e hemsel es ins ead o send news
o
wha is
eally
happening, whe e hey ind ha i happens, in he ci y, ha g ea ca alys
o
he a an -
ga de. Ashbe y epi omizes his mo emen . A doc o 's son om Roches e , he
wen
o
Ha a d, ha is, o Camb idge and Bos on, hen o Pa is, and inally loca ed
in
New
Yo k. Aside om being a poe , he has been
an
a c i ic, a media o
o
a an
-ga de
pain e s
o
his own ime and place.
The ci y, as me opolis, ep esen s p oblema ized space and so becomes
one
o
he g ea s imuli
o
ou
li e a u e and a .
l
is
he place
o
con inuous dialec ic, o
he
mos signi ican in e ac ion
o
Sel
wi h O he .
l
is he sea
o
colonial powe ,
he
cen e om which diaspo as occu , he e uge
o
hose su e ing hei own disloca ion.
The emblema ic dwelling places
o
he ci y a e he pen houses
o
he ich, he b owns ones
o
he bou geoisie, he lo s and ga e s
o
bohemia, and he ghe o. The ci y o ces
con inuous in e ac ion among hem all as e sions and sub e sions
o
each o he .
The
A mo y Shows
o
ali e as ha e been moun ed in ci ies, he na al place
o
he unde g ound,
o
sub e sion in i s mos po en o ms, and
o
he a an ga de. So he up own galle ies
o
Manha an s and always in ela ion
o
hose
o
Soho.
By a an
-g
a de 1 mean simply ha which calls i sel expe imen al, and by
expe-
imen al, ha which, in he case
o
poe y, bids
o
be conside ed poe y hough no
a
Flow Clw ,
an
In oduc ion 55
i s ead as such. Thus
i
is composed as a challenge o wha e e we ha e become
accus omed o eading. Li e a y his o y e els in one such challenge a e ano he . In
any gi en ime, a an ga de wo ks end o sha e a s yle.
No
one ac i e in US poe y
oda y be e sugges s
an
a a
n
-ga de s yle o ou i
me
han Ashbe y.
S e ens o esawelemen s o his s yle in his «No es Towa d a Sup eme Fic ion.»
«l
mus be abs ae!», he said, «
i
mus change», and «
i
mu
s gi e pleasu e.» How
be e
o
desc ibe he alues
o
he ci y o , o ha ma e ,
o
Ashbe y? The c
i
y o ces
abs ac ion and chan
ge
upon u
s.
l
cong ega es he ma e ials o many kinds
o
pleasu
e.
T alo
Cal ino
's
«Six Memos» o he Coming Millenium
-essays
on Ligh ness,
Quickness, Exac i ude,
Vi
sibili y, Mul ipli
ci
y,
and Consis ency
-e
x end S e ens's
demands and unde sco e isual expe ience.
In he ci y, we s agge unde
h
e psychic weigh
o
isual impe a i es. The ci y is
he place
o
ou
mos augh isual
e
la ions. In he ci y
ou
seeing is bu dened, guil y,
and o en exci ing.
I
is whe e we look and leam no o look, whe e we bo h no ice and
leam o sub e
ou
gaze. We ind h
a
looking can be inoppo une hough seeing is
bo h necessa y and una oidable. One can ha dly help being a oyeu jus as one
is
always, o nea ly always, cspecially in a ci y, awa c
o
wa ching one's sel . Ci y dwelle s
no only ea be
in
g mugged bu o en eel g
uil
y,
a e wa ds, o ha ing been ca eless
and so ha ing, in some sense, pe mi ed he a ack.
Depending on you poli ics, looking
in
he coun
y
side may
be
as guil y as in he
ci y, bu we a e less inclined
o
insis ha ha is so. In he
co
un y, we eel less in usi e
and ha i is pennissible o pause o a iew. Though bi d wa ching can be in e p e ed
as exe cising hegemony o e na u e, i s ill enjoys a high o de
o
cul u al app o al
e en hough i equi es s a ing, one
o
he o emos impoli enesses
o
u ban li in
g.
Fa ming can ce ainly be seen as de i ing om ou apacious gaze upon he land. Bu
we
need o ea , so we cul i a e a ega d o manual labo and encou age he a me 's
bene olen s ewa dship
o
ha land.
Habi s
o
seeing
in
he coun
y
lead
in
i
me
o li e a y con en ions.
In
he coun y,
o
in
ou sma
ll
owns, we a e mo e like
ly
o g ee s ange s and o me
e
hei gaze. We
can lea n no only o no ice bu
o
name and s udy hose bi ds. In ime, such s udy may
lead o ou seeing he bi d di e en l
y,
as a con incing me apho , pe haps
--o
lo e, o
hunge ,
o
longing. In he ci y, in con as ,
we
hesi a e o linge
o e a
iew.
So
we le
am
o
look ou
o he
come
o
o
u
eye. We s
ud
y pe iphe al ision and ind mo e lee ing
meanings he e. In ime we expe imen wi h o egoing me apho , which ends o
i
x a
meaning, o me onymy, which no ices bu le s go. Quickness, Visibili y, Mul iplici y;
i
mus change; i may gi e pleasu e.
We could specula e ha he e
is
some hing essen ially u al abou me apho . I
equi es
h
e equa ion
o
hings unde he umb ella
o
a la ge o de ha holds, such as
ha
o
seasons and hei changes. In ex ended me apho , pa holds wi h pa and ends
o s abilize meaning ali he mo e. Me onymy on he o he hand s eps mo e quickl
y.
I
o ego
es
h
e whole
o
e el
in
he pa , o pa
s.
Se
in
g aside a b oad in e es
in
an
56 Da id
Hami on
a my, i sha pens i s swo d. The swo d may signal a la ge o de , bu i will no
a emp
o comp ehend i .
No long ago, poe y was ali bu equa ed wi h me apho .
I
was signaled
by
a
complex o
subo de s- hyme,
me e , he consis en de elopmen
o
image y
and
o
heme. Now o ha e all hese o de s in place a once is almos a
sig
nal
o he
an ipoe ic,
a o lom nod
oan
old o de ha does no hold
us
unde i s spell. Any one
o hem
can
do now, can be mo e han enough. Unes, o example, can
be
de ined by no hing
mo e
han hei a bi a y, agged igh bounda ies. One migh call his a isual me onym
o
he olde poe ic line. Simila ly, occasional o obligue hyme
may
be a me onym
o
hyme as we emembe i , and as such
o
poe y
as
i once was.
Fo
gene a ions,
now,
me onymies ha e been c eeping
in
o challenge he domina ion
o
me apho in poe y.
No
poem could be a be e examplc han «The Red Wheelba ow», a ci y poem
i
he e
e e was one:
So much depends
u pon
a ed wheel
ba ow
glazed wi h ain
wa e
beside he whi e
chickens.
Williams o e s a se ies me onymies, h ee
o
hem, sugges ing bu e using
o
e eal one con incing me apho . No ha me apho ical eadings ha en
'
been ad anced,
making much
o
he colo s
o
innocence
and
m
a
y dom, o example,
o
o
a
ain eshened conjunc ion
o
he machine wi h na u e. Bu none has been sa is y
ing
.
Ha dly a ci y poe , and much gi en o me apho himsel , F os saw hese lines as a
« agmen », which would imply ha he me apho he sough
by
which o ead hem
had
no come in o iew. No would i , and so, o F os , he poem canno be whole.
The lines hold oge he hough like a adi ional poem, e
en
a poem
o
F os 's.
No ice he consis en balance
o
ou (and
in
one case h ee) syllable lines agains wo.
No ice he play
o
assonance om low back owels,
«O»
and «U», h ou
gh
mid owels,
«a» and «e», o he high on «Í.» No ice he «d», li ed o so ne deg ee
o
s ess in each
s anza, hus p o iding a chain o consonance h ough he whole. No ice he mu ed
hou
gh
suspended hym
e:
«depends
/upan
.
..
chickens.»
The poem us a es ou desi e o seek a me apho ical meaning.
Bu
i is mul iple
in i s image y, isible, and quick; i is ligh on i s ee and changes. My p i a e an asy
F/ow Cha . an In oduc ion 57
is
ha Williams composed i one a emoon a e
hi
s pal, Pound, bu s in o his oom
wi h news
o
he las exci ing hing
o
which he had
leamed- he
G ea Vowel Shi .
«Pound es s on he middle ages», Williams would say Ia e . Anyway, abso bed as he
was in some hing mo e ma e ial, ana omy e y likely, Williams,
o
ge id
o
Pound,
said «Oh, you
me
an like his» and imp o ised «
Th
e Red Wheelba ow» as a me onomy
o
philological lo e.
In
any case, i can be
ea
d as a se ies
o
me onymies o he casual jux aposi ions
o
con empo a y li ing, a angemen s no limi ed o bu una oidable in he ci y. Ashbe y,
among many o he s, has no iced. In Flow Cha he alludes o he
wheelba ow-»oh
ake his wheelba ow a om my sigh and bu y i on yonde heigh »
(65-6)-as
he
does o he b oken bi s
o
g een bo le in he cide alley (72), ano h
e
o
Williams'
me onymies. He e e s lo Williams' habi
o being
«ou iding, poin ing a some hing.»
«
Why
is i oo la e o
be
simple?», he asks
(71
),
a
mnin
g ha , om his own poin
o
icw i mos ce ainly is.
u
Time is oo sho
o me
o a emp mo e han a glancing eading
o
Ashbe y. He
is one
o
hose a e cases in which, hough associa ing himsel wi h he a an -ga de and
ad ancing a poe ics
in
enns
o
he an ipoe
i
c, has
be
en aken up
in
his own li e ime as
a benchma k
o
poe ic achie emen , es
pe
c ed by his ellows, hono ed by many mo e,
imi a ed and copied by ali and sund y, an hol
og
ized by i als in ou domes ic ibaliza ion
o
poc s and poe ies, and he ecipien
o
nea ly ali he na ional p izes o poe y one
can name. He has published a leas i een sepa a e olumes
o
poe y wi
h
hi
s pace
ha ing accele a ed o nea ly one pe yea .
In
so ne iews, such p oduc i i y
is
a c ime
agains poe y, which dismay p omo es in
u na
ce ain mys e y abou his me hods and
conjec u es ha a e no doub apoc yphal.
My a o i e among hose, and his pe haps s imula ed by a po ai
o
Ashbe
y
by La y Ri e s,
in
which he poe
si
s be o e a manual ypew i e on a
co
ee able
s a ing a some hing unseen bu e y likely a
in he middle dis ance
o
a li ing oom,
would ha e Ashbe y compose in
jus
such a posi ion daily, wi h a wen y- ou hou
mo ie channel on in he backg ound so ha whene e he is a a loss o wo d
o
image
he me ely eco ds wha e e ca ches his eye on he sc een. 1 ha e no eason o belie e
his ale.
Ye
i
pleases wi h a hin
o
plausibili y, o i seems o explain i s he mys e ious
p o usion
o
his poems and hen hei cons an low ha a ely se les on a subjec bu
seems o ca ch ins ead a momen
o
ligh ,
o
ansi ion belween
o
among subjec s,
hough i would no explain
h
e ange
o his
subjec s
o
his language. A ela ed conjec u e
would
be
ha Ashbe y has aken o hea he lessons
o
mid- o
Ja
e-cen u y heo y,
especially abou eade s pa icipa ing in
i
no domina ing he cons uc ion
o
a poem,
by which he has ound he con idence o o e any kind
o
mix, bel ing on ou dogged
de e mina ion o ind meanings o
i
whe he he ca ed o see any
o
no .
58
Da id Hamil on
You
will no be su p ised, hen, o no ice as dis inguished a c i icas John
Bayley
saying ha Ashbe y «cons an ly sugges s meaning wi hou
e e
being so banal
as
o
a emp i .» O o Helen Vendle o liken his poe y o Zeno's pa adox: «No ma e
how
you has en owa d you goal, you will always be unable o each i .» O o
me
o
be
eminded
o
a ema k
o
J ohn Cage 's, said abou
he
wo ks
o
J oyce, Sa i, and
Duchamp,
ha hey « esis ed he ma ch
o
unde s anding and so a e as esh now as when
hey
we e i s made.»
O
o a ecen s uden
o
mine o sugges ha Ashbe y «would
wa
ch
he uni e se mu a e a andom.» Vendle , a e all, ci esAshbe y quo ing Hen
y
James,
as «one
o
hose on whom no hing is los », and she applies he line o he poe .
No
<loes
Ashbe y discou age such sugges ions when, o example, on he i s page
o
Flow
Cha , he places his small passage:
l
seems J was eadíng some híng;
l ha e o go en he sense
o
i
o
wha he small
ole
o
he cen al poem made me wan
o
eel. No ma e .
The wo ds, dis an now, and mi ed, glin .
Ye
no one
e e escapes he o es
o
agony and pleasu e ha keeps hem
in a solu ion ha has become pe manen h ough ine ia. The o ce
o
meaning ne e ex udes. And he insec s,
o
cou se, don
'
mind.
«I mus be abs ac .» The e is a s ong sense
o
abs ac ion he e
in
ha ideas
o
eading and
o
a poem a e mo e e iden han examples
o
ei he . A o es
o
agony
and
pleasu e is no o es
we
know hough he ph ase sugges s he na u e
o
o es s. Manusc ip
e idence shows ha Ashbe y cu wo lines be ween he las wo sen ences quo ed, p
e
hap
s
o ein o ce he associa ion
o
«meaning» as i can be imagined o «ex ude>>-like
oo hpas e, o sausage om i s casing, o exc
emen -wi h
he insec s ha would c
awl
ali o e i
i
i did.
I
seems cha ac e is ic ha he image gi en by «insec s» and «ex udes»
is explici ly denied by he sen ences in which hey appea . The e is no ex usion a he
han so ne, and he insec s «don
'
mind» being denied hei na u al due. Again we
a e
in
he ealm
o
ideas a he han among examples. These a e no he an s
o
Tho eau. By
now, mo eo e , one becomes awa e
o
ha ing been d awn away om he ea lie lines,
which mus be a leas as impo an!, o hey a e no only abou eading, bu abou he
nos algic idea
o
a «cen al poem», in which well joined, ha is «mi ed» wo ds «glin .»
O
cou se ha ph ase al so means wo ds digni ied as bishops and so decked ou in ancy
headd ess. Reading Ashbe y is a con inuous ad en u e
o
nego ia ing such passag
es,
in
which he e bal landscape is always shi in
g-I
mus change!-and wonde ing
how
o en one migh e u n h ough hem o disco e pleasu es one has missed.
Flow Cha is a poem
o
214
pages di ided in o six unnamed sec ions indica ed
by Roman nume als and subdi ided u he by in e mi en whi e space and by whi e
Flow Cha ,
an
In
oduc ion 59
space enhanced
by
a ypog aphic squiggl
e.
These di isions o en appea andom, pe haps
me ely a eco d
o
places he s opped o sleep,
o
o co ee
b
eaks, o when
h
e mo ie
changed on he , and no always coming o a ull s op g anuna ically when he does.
One passage owa d he end is a ou de o ce
h
a is becoming amous; i is a double
ses ina,
ba
sed on Swinbume. The i
s
o
i s dozen s anzas p ecedes one
o
hose squiggle
di ide s, and
an
o he page
anda
h
al
ollows he ses ina
's
coda be a e he sec ion V
ends. Tha is he kind
o
mo e ha sugges s casualness abou di ision,
o
p í a e
de e mina ions,
o a
desi e o de lec us om no icing ha a ses ina has begun.
Th
e i s
ime I ead he
poem
, 1 did no no ice
i
a
ali. I me ely saw ha so ne wo ds we e being
epea ed. «Sun lowe » s uck me, and I w o e in my ma gins, «lo s
o
su
n l
owe s he e.»
I
is eache ous o quo e om Ashbe y, o e e y quo a ion ex ac ed denies
passages be a e and a e ha migh be as ui ul. He e hough a e a ew ha may gi e
a sense
o
Ashbe y,
o
a
leas
o
wha caugh my eye while eading him:
Wo ds, howe e a e no he culp i . They a e
a
wo s a placebo
leading nowhe e ( hough nowhe e, i mus be added, can some imes be a cozy
place, p e e able
in
many cases o somewhe e). (24)
Repe i ion makes epu a ion.
Besides, i 's some hing you build wi h.
You
need
no
longe inspec he ma e ials
when you buy hem in bulk. (133-
4)
Wha
i
poe y) we e only a small, o he way
o
li ing,
like being
in
he wind?
o
le ing he a ious se ling sounds we hea now
es and eco d he e o any c ea u e has o pu o h
o
summon i s spi i s o a
momen and hen
all
si
len , hoping ha enough has happened? (145)
I
's
my Sona a
o
Expe ience, and I w o e i o you. He
e's
how
i
goes: he i s heme is
announced, hen ooled a ound wi h o a while and goes and si s o e he e. (172)
One de ec s a no e
o
pa ody in ali his.
I'
e chosen passages ha sugges Ashbe y 's
w i e ly sense
o
his wo k, his oying wi h ha , and his p o oking bo h himse
l
and his
eade s by mulling o e e olu iona y ideas. Each passage spa kles wi h sub e si e
hinking. Each, in my iew, «glin s», as
<lo
es
his longe one, in abou he
sa
me
one,
ha de ines as well as any hing I know he spi i
o
he a an -ga de while h ea ening
equa!ly o de la
e
i :
I can ell you a s o y abou some hing. The exp ession will
be
jus
i
gh ,
o
i
will be adjus ed
60
Da id
Hami on
o he demands
o
he onn, and he o m i se
l
shall
be
imeless hough
hi he o
un
suspec ed.
l
will ake us down o abou now,
hough a ew beau i ul a chaisms will be allowed o lu e in i -<<co
mplain
»,
o one.
You
will be amazed a how ouched you will
be
because
o
i , ye
no emp ed
o
ind
au1
wi h he au ho o doing so supe la i e a job ha
i
lea es
his willing bu b ea hless eade s on he sideline
s,
like people wai ing o
hou s
beside a illage s ee o see he c oss-coun y bicycle ide s come zipping h ough
in hei
ye
llow o sil e li e ies, and
i '
s ali o
e
so as you' e no su e
you e en saw i . ...
Bu you won' mind ha ei he , since his li e a u e will ha e pe o med i s
du y
by
se
ing you gen ly down
in
a new place and
h
en speeding
o
be o e
yo
u ha
e
a chance
o
hank i . W
e' e
go o ind a n
ew
nam
e o him. «
W i e
»
scems
o ally inadequa e; ye
i
is w i ing, you ead i be o e you knew i . And besi
de
s,
i
i we en ' , i wouldn
'
ha e done he unexpec ed and
by
doing so p o ed
ha
i
was qui e
he
hing o do. (185-6)
This passage ali bu immedia ely p ecedes he double ses ina, which
se
em
s
des ined o become emblema ic
o
hi
s poem. The ses ina begins en
Jin
es la e wi h
«W
e' e
in e es ed in he language, ha you call b ea h», «b ea h» being he i s o he
dozen end wo ds Ashbe y akes om Swinbu ne and employs in p ecise
ly
he s
am
e
pa em as he,
in
h
is
«Complain
o
Lisa», which in um bea s as e
pi
g aph a eminde
o
Boccaccio, Lisa's
co
mplain be
in
g cen al o he se en h ale
o
he en h day
o
he
Decame on. One ne e knows when o qui when ci ing in e ex uali ies, bu le i be
said ha Boccaccio's ale is one
o
h owing, p ojec ing, o ansmi ing one's oice
h ough in e media ies and su oga es, which idea bea s mo e han a li le ela ion o
aking Swinbu ne as one's
exa
mple, chos
ing
Swinbu ne
's
a e double ses ina, and
d o
ppin
g «
ianguage»
in o i s i s line which
will
end w
i h
«
b ea h
.»
I
ha
s
e e y hing o do wi h a « imcless» o o «hi he o unsuspec ed»,
com
ing
down
om Boccaccio o «abou now», wi h a ew «beau i ul
a c
haism
s»
being
«a
llowed
o lu e in i .»
Lisa, an apo hecam 's daugh e , alls in
Jo
e
wi
h he king, whose lo e is a h
ope
less
!o e, he king being ma ied al eady and high abo e he s a ion. So she alls
in
o
lo esickness.
Th
e king, a sympa he
i
c igu e, hea s
o
his and
se
nds his mins
el
o
inqui e.
The
gi l ells he mins el he s o y and he, much mo ed, p omises o ca
y
i
o
hei king. ln e es ingly, a sma echnical complica ion occu s a his momen , o he
mins el, ei he incapable
o
o
i
nding i un hinkable o compose his own «o iginal»
so
ng
, employs a songw i e o do ha o him be a e he e ums wi h he
sc
ip ed, p ac iced
e sion o he king. Wha a e we o suppose he e, ha D
e
ida
wa
s al
so
a eade o(
Flow Cha , an In oduc ion
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Boccaccio and Swinbu ne? O ha De ida ells an old s o y in newe , mo e abs ac
language? Anyway,
h
e mins el sings his, he , hei , sad ale o he king who, much
mo ed himsel , decides o isi such an ob iously i uous and end
e
maid. He does.
Being no only noble bu
o
good hea , and pu e enough mind, i ne e en e s in o he
s o y ha he king migh do o he han se e he well, ha is,
o
a ange he ma iage o
a sui able cou ie . This he will do a he cos
o
one kiss om he maiden. And ha she
will g an only
i
his queen does no objecl. Ali ends happily ali he way a ound, and he
elle concludes wi h a eminde ha kings, hough
al
l powe ul, a e abJe
o
beha e well
now and hen.
I jus said «
Í
ne e en e s in o he s o y», bu he b ea h
o
co up ion was he e
ali along.
We
ead he s o y well awa e
o
o he ums
i
migh ha e aken.
l
hin s
o
an
audience p epa ed o hea a di e en s o y,
o
a less i uous maid, o
o
a apacious
king,
o
o
bo h, and so
o
his s o y being laye ed, as i we e, on ano he unhea d bu
well emembe ed. And ha is ali he mo e eason o i o d aw he a en ion
o
eade ly
and w i e ly poe s like Ashbe y.
Like Ashbe y, he king did he unexpec ed and «by doing so p o ed i was qui e
he hing o do.» Say he was king
o
a benign a an -ga de.
Fo
he momen , anyway,
Ashbe y seems king
o
ou
na ional poe y, and gi en he small space 1 ha e o wo k
wi h he e, his double ses ina
se
ems a good choice o ep esen! his sp aw
Jin
g and complex
wo k. So I will inish
by
elling a di e en s o y
o
i .
Las yea , I w o e Ashbe y o say ha a class wou
ld
be
eading Flow Cha wi h
me, and 1 asked whe he he could spa e copies
o
one
o
wo d a pages. This seemed
a happy way
o
ge ing a class
o
begin alking abou a poem. 1 didn' know Ashbe y,
and 1 expec ed no eply, so 1 was o e whelmed by his gene ous esponse. An assis an
called me, asked wha passages I was in e es ed in, and when, nonplused, l had no
conc e e sugges ions o make, sugges ed he double ses ina and wo o he s. Tha 's when
I lea ned o go back and look o ha ses ina.
Soon l
e
cei ed a passage om he beginning, in which I ound he cu be ween
«insec s» and «ex udes», a middle passage, and ma e ial including he double ses ina
and unning on o he end. The e we e wen y-nine pages
o
ypesc ip , densely single
spaced, mo e han six y pages
o
he inal ex , almos one hi d
o
he poem.
l
is
labelled «o iginal manual ypesc ip », as
i
i we e i s w i en in a pos u e much like
he po ai by Ri e s. 1 do no know how man y sc ip s
o
o
wha kind p eceded i . No
how many o he s ollowed. The e a e changes and cu s, plen y
o hem
when you begin
lis ing, bu he o e wheJming imp ession is
o
Ashbe y's le ing hings s and,
o
line
a e line mo ing en i ely om «O iginal manual ypesc ip » o he p in ed ex al hough
one whole page
o
co
uple s has been los ha would ha
e
added abou h ee new pages
jus beJow he middle
o
he p esen page 66. This was p obably beca use a ypis u ned
o e wo lea s oge he
by
acciden and no iced no disjunc ion. Tha ailu e o no ice is
easy o unde s and.
The ses ina began, appa en ly, by Ashbe y yping he wel e end wo ds down